Self Review

1. I feel the first paragraph is clear on introducing both the story and psychological theme I choose. Although I do feel I need to elaborate and provide more detail. The first sentence is definitely relevant in giving a quick synopsis of the story.
2. The thesis statement is obvious in that it refers to Alice from “Alice in Wonderland” along with theme I will write about. Thesis: Throughout the story Alice can be seen to have a poor self-image. Despite the fact that the thesis can be identified it definitely needs to be further supported. If I provide that support, any reader would be able to see why I made that observation and came to that conclusion.
3. I feel like each opening statement helps to provide a brief introduction of what’s to come in the paragraph that follows. The main concepts I choose to write about was self-image as well as its relation to both personality and self-perception. Each paragraph somewhat helps to further those main concepts but I definitely need to add more details.
4. I need some work or better reviewing my paper to find run on sentences and lack of punctuation in necessary areas. However I do find the usage of certain words and style of sentences to be helpful in proving my point.
5. I need a lot of work on citing my references.
6. The papers strengths are that it serves a strong argument about the theme I have chosen and how that theme is seen throughout “Alice in Wonderland”. Also it provides an interesting perspective on how self-image can be tied to other themes.